Having watched the second rough cut of the documentary, I noticed a few things that need changing in order to make the documentary better.
The soundtrack does not fit the theme of the documentary - the song is far too loud and plays over some of the interviews, while in other parts of the documentary, there is no sound, but it does return after a while.
The interview with Gary Brown at the end of the documentary isn't necessarily needed at all in the documentary. It does not add anything to the documentary and it slows the pace of the video down.
The montage at the end of the video could perhaps be used at the start of the video and looks as though it was taken off someone's promo video.
The montage at the start of the documentary does not explain anything, it is confusing and therefore needs a voiceover.
Those are the main points that I noticed with the documentary.
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